On this week’s podcast, we talked about the types of conflict in your story. You can check it out here.
But I wanted to delve into internal conflict a tiny bit more.
Internal conflict is when your character is waffling about something important in the story. Sometimes that’s hard to figure out.
Here are some hints about creating internal conflict.
Think about the character.
Yep, that’s it. You have to think and know about your main character to understand their internal struggle.
- What are their morals? Are they all about peace? Justice? Freedom? Creativity?
- What are they afraid of happening more than anything else? What’s their biggest fear?
- Is that biggest fear related to their core values?
- What do they want more than anything in the world? What do they yearn for? Why?
- How can their biggest fear and their biggest values mess up them getting their goal in the story?
Boom. Done. Brilliant right?
If you’re still stuck, this author, John Vorhaus, uses the BUT method.
I love my husband, but sometimes he turns into a Big Foot and I’m allergic to fur.
I want to get promoted, but my boss never promotes gerbils and I’m super proud of being a gerbil and don’t want to be a hamster.My twisted brain
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