I’m not talking about tagging a friend or a celebrity on social media. I’m talking about dialogue tags, those helpful little buggers that show you who is speaking.
Like here:
“How about you try this ancient thinking fruit?” she said.
The dialogue tag is SHE SAID.
Here’s my First DIALOGUE Hint:
Every single dialogue line does not need a dialogue tag. Those babies can survive without them!
So, don’t do this:
“How about you try this ancient thinking fruit?” she said.
“What do you mean, ‘thinking fruit?'” he asked.
“The fruit helps you think,” she said.
“Does it think for you?” he asked. “Because that seems wrong.”
“We must all think for ourselves,” she agreed.
All tags
That reads like a second grade book that you didn’t quite enjoy, right? Not even in second grade.
“How about you try this ancient thinking fruit?” she said.
“What do you mean, ‘thinking fruit?'” he asked.
“The fruit helps you think.”
“Does it think for you? Because that seems wrong.”
“We must all think for ourselves,” she agreed.
Less tags
If you have two people talking you don’t ALWAYS have to tell us who said what. The paragraph indents give us that clue.
Here is my Second DIALOGUE Hint
If you add in the character action instead of the dialogue tag, it can make things zing and change meaning.
“How about you try this ancient thinking fruit?” She held the potato above her head, thrusting it towards the sky.
He took one step backwards, eyeing the spud. Someone had stuck plastic appendages and even eyes and lips into it. “What do you mean, ‘thinking fruit?'”
“The fruit helps you think.” She brought the potato back down to her level and kissed its bright, red lips.
“Does it think for you?” he asked. “Because that seems wrong. Also, potatoes aren’t fruit.”
“We must all think for ourselves.”
Add in some action
That’s it! Two fast tips about dialogue tags. Fastest writing tips ever, right?
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