Some words are overused.
And no, I’m not talking about bae or bro or even awesome.
I’m talking about the words that just aren’t doing anything for writers and that writers are being lazy about using. I think of these words as placeholders, they hold a place for us when we’re drafting so that when we revise we can go back and make things better.
Top Five Dead Words
Ex: She looked good, man.
Seriously? What does that mean? What kind of word is this? Good is a placeholder. To what degree is she looking good? How good is she looking?
Ex: He was a bad man.
Um, aren’t we all bad man, deep inside? What is it that makes him bad? What kind of bad is he? Creepy? Nasty? Wicked?
You, know man, stuff was happening.
What? No, I don’t know! What kind of stuff? Don’t be a lazy writer.
In dialogue this word works, but in your narrative? Not so much.
Ex: I got up and got the dog.
Do you mean you woke up? And then you picked up the dog? Or something? WHAT DO YOU MEAN, WRITER?
I swear, my high school English teacher would scream if any of us students wrote ‘very’ in a story. He would circle it 8,000 times in red pen and would say, “If you get nothing else from this class, understand this. VERY should not exist. Excommunicate it from your writing.”
Why did he despise the word so much?
It’s an intensifier meant to make the word following behind it even more powerful, but he believed that if the word needed ‘very,’ then it wasn’t a powerful enough word on its own.
Or as Florence King said, “‘Very’ is the most useless word in the English language and can always come out. More than useless, it is treacherous because it invariably weakens what it is intended to strengthen.”
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