Ready for step six in my Revision Series of Awesome?
Spoiler: I’m not sure how awesome it truly is. I kind of just made up that name.
For summary or recap. Imagine a montage like they do before an episode of your fave series. Imagine really big crescendos and music too, okay?
The first step was taking a breather.
The second step was doing the read-through.
The third step is really making decisions.
Step Four – Deciding if your changes are huge or tiny? Start with the huge ones that impact the whole book. Fix those things.
Step Five is reading through it all again after you’ve made the changes and tweaking some thing. What? I know! I know! What a beast!
WE ARE ON STEP SIX!!! We’re so close, my friends!
Okay, now we’re onto my absolute favorite part – the scene. I love scenes SO MUCH that I’m actually teaching a course about them at the Writing Barn next fall!
So in this revision step, we look at the scene and we remember some really core and important things.
- Does the scene move the plot forward? No? You might have to cut that baby.
- Does the scene more the character forward? Are they evolving here? No? You might have to cut that baby.
- Does that scene have people who matter to your plot? No? Maybe cut the baby.
- Does it have the right point of view? No? Revise it so it does.
- Does it have silly, boring dialogue? Cut it.
What is silly dialogue?
It’s this.
Carrie: Hi.
Writer: Hi.
Carrie: The weather is nice.
Writer: Yep.
Carrie: I like manatees.
Writer: Yeah, okay.
Bad Dialogue by Carrie 🙂
Let’s go back to our list. Let’s make a new one!
- Does your scene use all the senses? Can you feel where they are? Make sure you can!
- Are there talking heads in the scene? Give your character tics, habits, things to do. Have them interact with the world?
- Is it a big info dump? Yes? Fix it! Any time that you see the word ‘dump,’ it’s usually not a good thing.
- Does everyone sound the same? Fix that!
- Does your scene have a beginning, middle, and end? It should!
- Does it seem like the characters only just start living the moment that you start the scene? It shouldn’t!
WHEW! I swear! I swear! You’ve got this! Your book is going to be so shiny!
LET’S HANG OUT!
HEY! DO YOU WANT TO SPEND MORE TIME TOGETHER?
MAYBE TAKE A COURSE, CHILL ON SOCIAL MEDIA, BUY ART OR A BOOK, OR LISTEN TO OUR PODCAST?
Email us at carriejonesbooks@gmail.com
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Thanks to all of you who keep listening to our weirdness on the DOGS ARE SMARTER THAN PEOPLE podcast and our new LOVING THE STRANGE podcast.
We’re sorry we laugh so much… sort of.
Please share it and subscribe if you can. Please rate and like us if you are feeling kind, because it matters somehow. There’s a new episode every Tuesday!
Thanks so much for being one of the 263,000 downloads if you’ve given us a listen!
One of our newest LOVING THE STRANGE podcasts is about the strange and adorably weird things people say?
And one of our newest DOGS ARE SMARTER THAN PEOPLE episode is about fear setting and how being swallowed by a whale is bad ass.
And Carrie has new books out! Yay!
You can order now! It’s an adult mystery/thriller that takes place in Bar Harbor, Maine. Read an excerpt here!

It’s my book! It came out June 1! Boo-yah! Another one comes out July 1.
And that one is called THOSE WHO SURVIVED, which is the first book in the the DUDE GOODFEATHER series. I hope you’ll read it, like it, and buy it!

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Email us at carriejonesbooks@gmail.com
HELP US AND DO AN AWESOME GOOD DEED
Thanks to all of you who keep listening to our weirdness on the DOGS ARE SMARTER THAN PEOPLE podcast and our new LOVING THE STRANGE podcast.
We’re sorry we laugh so much… sort of.
Please share it and subscribe if you can. Please rate and like us if you are feeling kind, because it matters somehow. There’s a new episode every Tuesday!
Thanks so much for being one of the 263,000 downloads if you’ve given us a listen!
One of our newest LOVING THE STRANGE podcasts is about the strange and adorably weird things people say?
And one of our newest DOGS ARE SMARTER THAN PEOPLE episode is about fear setting and how being swallowed by a whale is bad ass.
And Carrie has new books out! Yay!
You can order now! It’s an adult mystery/thriller that takes place in Bar Harbor, Maine. Read an excerpt here!

It’s my book! It came out June 1! Boo-yah! Another one comes out July 1.
And that one is called THOSE WHO SURVIVED, which is the first book in the the DUDE GOODFEATHER series. I hope you’ll read it, like it, and buy it!
